From: Rivaldo IN-2 1002
Not many of us are aware that high school life and campus life have several things in common. The first similarity is the obligations. Not only high school student but also campus student must study and do their assignments. The second similarity is the extracurricular. Not only high school but also campus have extracurricular like sports, martial arts, English club, and arts. The third similarity is the social life. In high school, there is a seniority. Likewise, in campus there is seniority too. The last similarity is places to hangout. Not only students in high school but also students in campus like to go to the malls, cafes and cinemas. So, both high school and campus have several similarities in obligations, extracurricular, social life, and places to hangout.

From : Khansa IN-2 1002
Not many of us are aware that high school life and campus life several things in common. The first similarity is that both high school life and campus life have same obligations like study hard, do assignment and obey their teacher. Second, not only high school life but also campus life have many extra-curricular(activities) like basketball, football, theater, climbing, movie maker, choir, etc. Unlike in junior high school, the extra-curricular in high school is more varied. Third high school life as well as campus life have the same social life, like, hangout together and do homework together. Finally, both high school life and campus life have the same places to hang out, such as mall, cafe, or in the park. In brief, high school life and campus life, though not identical, are not poles apart.

From: Anissa IN-2 1002
Not many of us know that high school and campus life have some similarities. The first is similarity is both high school life and campus life is their obligations. They must doing(you mean: Do) their obligations (Omit this part: preferences study so hard). The second is similarity is not only high school life but also campus life has extra-curricular. For example, (Omit this: like) sport. Usually that sport is wall climbing. High school (Omit this: life, change with students) sometimes spend their time for (omit this: do) wall climbing. Not just for high school life but campus life(change the word “life” with “students”) loved (add: to) spend their time doing wall climbing. The third is similarity is social life, high school usually do homework together. Likewise, campus life usually do homework together. And finally, high school and campus life always spend their on weekend for togetherness. Both high school life and campus life like to hangout in mall.